Audience Focus Group 2 Feedback

Our second audience focus group's reaction on the other hand was a little bit different.  Although some enjoyed it - saying it had a tense atmosphere which was very gripping, and a little bit of charisma which lightens the moods - not only did the others dislike the song, but they thought the concept of the video was lacking in a storyline... In hip-hop videos usually there can or cannot be a story line - some have it, some don't. I attempted to explain that there isn't supposed to much of a storyline, but some were having none of it. Either way, we attempt to work on the video according to all the feedback we were given.